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so much nasalgia with this, awesome job!

Darkzeropro779 responds:

appreciate it buddy

i Really like the Line art, something is missing on the full colored one for me, maybe it's too much black but I'm not sure if that's the issue I have with it.

TheManofSteal13 responds:

Thanks for the feedback! The colored one I also feel like something is missing, so I agree with you there. I'll see if I can go back into it and see what I can fix to make it just right once I get some more free time.

Im no expert far from it but I might suggest practicing panel layout so it is easier to follow the narrative. I like the style of the characters but maybe having the bird being a white silhouette style as well might help it make more sense. Here a link to a pin I try to follow when practicing comic panels.
https://www.pinterest.com/pin/574209021217622444/

WorldlyComics responds:

Thanks so much! Yeah that would have helped!

Love this idea!

Steamoti responds:

Thank you :)

I Really Like the Design, It looks like it should be a mega evolution of Kingler.

AKwidzinski responds:

Thank you !

It looks so Natural, Very Nice Style.

Djoresh responds:

=3 thanks!

I Love the Shell Very Creative

JackSquatJB responds:

Thanks! The geode idea was the clincher for making this!

I like the lighting, it adds to the eeriness this Pokemashup has. great choice!

theMix85 responds:

Thank you :))

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